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Saturday, January 24, 2009
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4:39 PM - Total Defence GOLD
Dear all,
Ms Blur Queen at your service here. Ok so sir had said that the story must include nuggets from the past. So, i came up with the following plot. please leave your comments at the tagboard to improve my ingenius plot. hoho. Xin tong got struck by lightning one day. (Sorry kewei I don't mean to curse you.) after months of recuperating in the hospital, she miraculously survives. She unknowingly gained the power to be able to travel back in time after the horrific lightning incident. (ok i know your may think this story is crap cause it makes no sense from the start. BUT imagination has no boundaries.) Xin Tong was very filial towards he grandpa, as she felt that grandpa had gone through alot during the war period and had suffered alot. Her Grandpa's health was not in good condition, and he might kick the bucket anytime. On his death bed, Xintong heard the story about how her Grandma had passed away. And how it had been his regret all his life. The "love" story Grandpa and Grandma's story goes like that. Dating back to World War 2 period. Grandma just gave birth to Xin tong's dad, TingTong (that's his name for now.) Grandpa was part of Force 136, he was wanted by the japanese due to his active participation in the anti-japanese group. When grandpa had gone on a mission one fateful night, Grandma and TingTong was captured. The Japanese left a note daring Grandpa to go and surrender himself in exchange for grandma and TingTong. Upon his return, grandpa immediately headed to the Kempeitei Headquarters secretly. Peeping through a window, he saw grandma hugging TingTong whilst she was being tortured. Grandma spotted Grandpa and mouthed to grandpa to go before it was too late. But Grandpa wouldn't leave. He was guilty to have land his wife and son in this state. Soon, Grandma and Tingtong were thrown out of the headquarters after they thought grandma had died and they thought that grandpa would never come back for them again. Grandpa immediately rushed to the batered Grandma's side. Grandma told grandpa... no matter how hard he had to make sure Tingtong was safe. after that she died. Xin Tong saw the sadness in Granpa's eyes and headed back to the past to save grandma. It resulted in the death of Tngtong, Xin Tong's father. Thus Xintong was unable to head back to the future where she belonged. Ok somehow after typing the plot, i feel that the story is crappish. Ok comments please! Love, Vivian ;D Labels: total defence gold |
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